Essay Writing. PLEASE help

[JakkiGirl]

Hello friends, I'm new here.

I'm currently doing a level 3 supporting teaching and learning in schools course and the essay writing is driving me mad!

I'm using all the key words/topics. Keeping to word limits and using references but I'm still only getting a pass grade. Is there something in particular that I'm missing to get at least a merit? I thought I was doing great writing, it's so gutting.

Any tips or advice would be greatly received. Thanks.

[Ruthierhyme]

Hi a very warm welcome to the site. The best place for advice is your assessor who's seen your written work and can advise you on improvements, also check if your course awards merit, distinction or if it's pass fail.

There are some tips on this page that can help focus your essay's structure and content http://www2.le.ac.uk/offices/ld/reso...ve-essay-top10

Best wishes & let us know how it's going xx